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Moon eclipses devouring lips; wind is blowing, saliva drips. Vapors lift on creature cunning; moon is showing, blood is running. The darkness falls and claws do reach; the beast calls and its arms beseech. Blood is running on graveyard palls; the fear pervades and darkness falls. Terror invades and vapors lift, wolf is howling and my eyes shift. Darkest Hades, fear is dunning skeleton beach, but blood is running. Written 9/21/16

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Date: 9/22/2016 8:02:00 AM
Repetition can be detrimental to poetic delivery but as this work clearly demonstrates it can also enhance. Well done.
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