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we all have a monster in some part of us and we are afraid of it  we can  control it 

until you are hurt then your mind takes over and we plan our revenge 

evan if you know deep down its just a way of letting your anger out after being hurt 

the monster i write about is the inner you wanting to give payback for the pain and suffering 

everybody has they're own monster inside them .....

IN my mind there is loneliness and an empty space filled with darkness 
and disgrace.

there is a monster lose in side my mind there is no one like it
it's one of a kind.

I try to control the bad thing's that it think  I have tried to banished it
with drugs and drink.

But when the drugs and drink are there no more back comes my tormentor
to kick down my minds door.

I have to Bury it deep in side my mind but a way to torment me 
my monster will find.

I searched for salvation to find a way out to show my frustration
I scream and I shout.

I search in the darkness for a door with a key that will free my
tormenter and set my mind free.

so I hide in this darkness so no one will see that the monster I hide is 
really me.

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Date: 12/16/2023 2:34:00 AM
So many tormenters, so many monsters. Nice poem, PW.
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