Monsoon Skies

gray clouds swell overhead-
pouring tears of great relief…
drenching parched cactus.

Copyright © 2010 By Caryl S. Muzzey
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Neels Avatar
June 22, 2010 at 9:22 AM
Congrats for your HM for this visual masterpiece tc Wilma
Brown Avatar
June 21, 2010 at 7:23 AM
Congratulations on your win in Paula Swanson's contest "Monsoon Storms" Caryl. Love, Carol
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June 17, 2010 at 1:15 PM
Congrats Caryl on your HM in the Monsoon contest with this wonderful write and win ..so now enjoy your sweet honor .. with luv Linda-Marie..
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June 14, 2010 at 7:16 PM
very well written description on your haiku, good luck on the contest...P.D.
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June 14, 2010 at 1:08 PM
Nice imagery! Love the 'tears of relief'. Best of luck in the contest ~ Sharon :)
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