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Monsoon Night

stinging rain, and wind pounding loudly my tin roof.... drones in changing pitch Jun 14 2010 For Paula's "Monsoon" contest

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Marie Harrison

Date: 6/17/2010 5:07:00 PM

A beautiful haiku. We'll be seeing those soon.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/15/2010 12:13:00 PM

Outstanding haiku that makes me think of the "drones" we hear during hurricane season. I wanted to read your blog, but nothing came up, Charles. Is it my computer? Best wishes to you, dear friend. Soup mail in a moment. Love, Carolyn

Faleshia Murphy

Date: 6/15/2010 11:10:00 AM

very nice good luck in the contest and thanks for enjoying my poem in your contest faleshia

Rick Parise

Date: 6/15/2010 3:49:00 AM

Thank you for the honor of 2nd place in your contest!!!!Have a blessed day~Rick

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/14/2010 8:45:00 PM

Very explicit Charles ..u covered all the sights and sounds of the monsoon..good luck in the contest.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" ...

Rick Parise

Date: 6/14/2010 7:34:00 PM

I love laying in bed and listening to a storm as I fall deep.................Very nice Charles , Enjoyed~Rick

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/14/2010 6:34:00 PM

Lovely description, good luck on the contest, enjoyed... P.D.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/14/2010 3:51:00 PM

Reads like a winning Haiku..Good luck in the contest...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara

Gavin Pattison

Date: 6/14/2010 3:51:00 PM

I like the use of the word 'stinging' in the first line and like the overall feeling that's sparked by your overall word usage and tone, thanks for this upload and all the best in the competition. From Gavin.