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Monsoon Night

stinging rain, and wind

pounding loudly my tin roof....

drones in changing pitch

Jun 14 2010 For Paula's "Monsoon" contest

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Marie Harrison

June 17, 2010 at 5:07 PM

A beautiful haiku. We'll be seeing those soon.

Carolyn Devonshire

June 15, 2010 at 12:13 PM

Outstanding haiku that makes me think of the "drones" we hear during hurricane season. I wanted to read your blog, but nothing came up, Charles. Is it my computer? Best wishes to you, dear friend. Soup mail in a moment. Love, Carolyn

Faleshia Murphy

June 15, 2010 at 11:10 AM

very nice good luck in the contest and thanks for enjoying my poem in your contest faleshia

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

June 14, 2010 at 8:45 PM

Very explicit Charles ..u covered all the sights and sounds of the monsoon..good luck in the contest.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" ...

Poet Destroyer A

June 14, 2010 at 6:34 PM

Lovely description, good luck on the contest, enjoyed... P.D.

Gavin Pattison

June 14, 2010 at 3:51 PM

I like the use of the word 'stinging' in the first line and like the overall feeling that's sparked by your overall word usage and tone, thanks for this upload and all the best in the competition. From Gavin.