Monotony

more danger than the outer 
                               internal enemies are multiple
                               until they can be conquered
                                    outer remains alive
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Gazbowski Avatar
April 12, 2017 at 11:50 AM
Magical wordery BL. Puts me in mind of the teachings of Ouspensky. A 7 for your wonderful effort.
Marie Avatar
April 11, 2017 at 4:53 PM
...wonderful thoughts beautifully expressed BL:) 'monotony' is a slow painful emptying that is so sad. lynnxxx I was so happy to see you today... wishing you a lovely Easter.
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