Monoku's Monoku

MONOKU'S MONOKU


                eye is the absolute reflector to the things we see at a time 
            reflection keeps memory so past old seen things can be memorized
             unseen things can not be stored in mind so remains out of memory
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Dietrich Avatar
February 9, 2016 at 5:55 PM
Hi, again. I see you are doing three lines for your monoku, BL. Just do one line. you could take these and separate the lines. They would be three lovely individual monoku.
Devnath  Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 10:23 AM
Thanks my lovely friend for your help with comment. Loved always,bl
Horsman Avatar
February 8, 2016 at 4:25 PM
Out of sight out of mind, not your poetry though, always in my mind..
Devnath  Avatar
February 8, 2016 at 7:58 PM
Thanks my lovely friend for your wonderful comment of appreciation. Loved always,bl
Henderson Avatar
February 6, 2016 at 3:42 PM
A truly unique tbought for this sentry. May we all go in peace and be blessed.
Devnath  Avatar
February 6, 2016 at 3:45 PM
Thanks my lovely friend for your visit and beautiful comment. Loved always,bl
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