Monoku- Summer Ebbs

as August burnishes yellow- 
                                         a brimstone generation blooms
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Kelly Avatar
August 19, 2008 at 8:20 AM
A great flow to go with the ebb , Brian ... We're still waiting for Summer over here ??
Winter Avatar
August 19, 2008 at 6:28 AM
A beautiful image of summer's end. Along with Kristin, I look forward to Autumn with great anticipation. Love, Shar
Reynolds Avatar
August 19, 2008 at 3:46 AM
Ahhh, most of my favorite memories and images come from autumn...beautifully written image, love Kristin
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