Monoku- Reverse Angles

mumurs of silvered petals -
                            willows whisper in the wind
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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August 5, 2008 at 3:01 PM
So very magical Brian. Superb. Regards Heidie
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August 5, 2008 at 2:39 PM
Wonderful poem. God Bless Phyl
Winter Avatar
August 5, 2008 at 11:48 AM
I hear them. Such a lovely write. Love, Shar
Sheart Avatar
August 5, 2008 at 10:55 AM
Hi Brian Oh so beautiful! "Willows whisper in the wind" I just love the feel to that. Many blessings to you and yours. Love Light Truth Patricia
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August 5, 2008 at 10:47 AM
like the last line willows whisper in the wind, just beautiful saying. enjoyed reading this short piece. thank you for reading my poem and for your comment.
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August 5, 2008 at 5:56 AM
...and what delightful secrets they share...love the willow tree and this monoku - blessings hun, love Kristin
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