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Monoku a Broken Variation

in the midst of death- lichens come to life NOTE A one line haiku known as a monoku (was the original form of haiku,written vertically) my version is a variation( I introduced here on PS some years back in 2007 )a broken line monoku.

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/8/2020 8:01:00 AM

I like the break, I think it is an effective way of adding interest to the form.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/25/2020 9:30:00 AM

Love it! I always break the line because it comes out looking wonky if I don’t.

Brian Strand
Date: 8/25/2020 10:23:00 AM

Yes Kim,I prefer it too.Stsy creative

Sigrid Ermine

Date: 8/25/2020 12:12:00 AM

Lichen is fascinating! Probably they like to adhere to skeletons. Good on you for breaking the line with Monoku. It obviously gives your statement more resonance.

Brian Strand
Date: 8/25/2020 12:36:00 AM

Thnk you Sigrid