Brian Strand Poet Monoku

Monoku a Broken Variation

in the midst of death-
                                  lichens come to life

NOTE
A one line haiku known as a monoku (was the original form of haiku,written vertically) my version is a variation( I introduced here on PS some years back in 2007 )a broken line monoku.

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Richard Lamoureux September 8, 2020 at 8:01 AM I like the break, I think it is an effective way of adding interest to the form.

Kim Rodrigues August 25, 2020 at 9:30 AM Love it! I always break the line because it comes out looking wonky if I don’t. Brian Strand August 25, 2020 at 10:23 AM Yes Kim,I prefer it too.Stsy creative

Sigrid Ermine August 25, 2020 at 12:12 AM Lichen is fascinating! Probably they like to adhere to skeletons. Good on you for breaking the line with Monoku. It obviously gives your statement more resonance. Brian Strand August 25, 2020 at 12:36 AM Thnk you Sigrid