Monoku

The primrose path, smooth fun self-destruction.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Croft Avatar
April 22, 2024 at 11:39 AM
I love monoku, they are strong one liners with a strong meaning.
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 15, 2018 at 12:57 PM
Hello S. zaynal, yes these are true spoken words. have a nice day my friend.
A  Avatar
May 10, 2015 at 12:13 PM
S.Zaynub, short but heavy. Have a nice day. Forever *SKAT*
Kendrick Avatar
May 12, 2014 at 11:15 AM
Interesting and deep one liner..A bed of roses is not necessarliy an easy one or a safe one..Your visit was uplifting..Sara
Callus Avatar
April 16, 2014 at 11:59 AM
Beautiful.....:) // paul
Horne Avatar
December 22, 2013 at 4:42 PM
enjoyed this thoughtful monoku, my friend
Poet Avatar
December 21, 2013 at 7:51 AM
THANK YOU FOR STOPING AT MY POEMS WITH SUCH A GOOD COMMENTS. HOPE I COVER BACK SOON
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