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Monoku 3: Water

no one would know Basho's frog jumped, for not even the wind moves the pond. 12/31/2017

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Date: 1/4/2018 10:37:00 PM
Wonderful Monoku, Jack - Happy New Year and congratulations on your win, my friend - well-deserved! :-)
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Jack Webster
Date: 1/4/2018 11:08:00 PM
Thank you Gregory!
Date: 1/4/2018 9:27:00 AM
great winner Jack, love the poetry.
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Jack Webster
Date: 1/4/2018 11:08:00 PM
Thank you Harry!
Date: 1/3/2018 12:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Jack, great monoku. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Jack Webster
Date: 1/4/2018 11:07:00 PM
Thank you, Eve!
Date: 1/3/2018 12:12:00 AM
way to go old school with the master...love it :)
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Jack Webster
Date: 1/4/2018 11:07:00 PM
Thank you David !
Date: 1/2/2018 9:34:00 AM
Delightful monoku, Jack. Well done. Congrats on your win.
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Jack Webster
Date: 1/2/2018 1:31:00 PM
Thank you Line!
Date: 1/2/2018 7:27:00 AM
love the reference to Basho's frog....nicely done
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Jack Webster
Date: 1/2/2018 1:31:00 PM
Thank you, John!
Date: 1/1/2018 4:23:00 PM
Congratulations on your awesome win Jack! ~Susan
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Jack Webster
Date: 1/1/2018 6:55:00 PM
Thank you Susan!
Date: 1/1/2018 3:52:00 PM
Congrats on your one liner, Jack! and a happy new year 2018
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Jack Webster
Date: 1/1/2018 6:55:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea! Happy New Year! So many poems, so little time! Manus Fugit!
Date: 1/1/2018 12:44:00 PM
- Congratulations on your great 2nd place in the contest, Jack :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Jack Webster
Date: 1/1/2018 6:52:00 PM
thank you, Sunshine!
Date: 1/1/2018 12:11:00 PM
Great one liner Jack..Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Jack Webster
Date: 1/1/2018 6:52:00 PM
thanks Silent One. i hate to ask, but the contest isn't showing up for me and i can't congratulate the other winners; is it possible for you to post a link to the contest page?

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