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Monoku 3 - Colorful Speech Impediment

marshmallows cling white ash yet tumbling they are all white • cold wanes dwip dwip




Written 1/4/18
Monoku 3 Colors
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Edward Mccall

January 18, 2018 at 12:47 PM

LOL so clever and so cute.

Rhoda Tripp

January 20, 2018 at 7:21 PM

Lol. It was fun dreaming up.

CayCay Godwin

January 6, 2018 at 12:30 AM

how cute! so you missed the deadline and hit the mark, you aren't the first, cough, cough! All the best ... CayCay

Rhoda Tripp

January 6, 2018 at 11:47 AM

Lol, CayCay...its always my procrastination that gets me in trouble. Don't ask about my novel in progress. Lol. Thank you for your continued kindness and encouragement. Your friendship is invaluable.

Arturo Michael

January 5, 2018 at 10:35 AM

Call d shwink...d marshmallows cling...Very imaginative...creativity out of hand...Blessing to you Rhoda

Rhoda Tripp

January 5, 2018 at 12:49 PM

LMBO. I adore your humor, Arturo! Thank you for making me laugh and for your kindness. Blessings doubled, air kissed, and returned ten fold.

Chris Green

January 4, 2018 at 4:03 PM

This was fun to weed. :)

Rhoda Tripp

January 4, 2018 at 6:18 PM

Lol. Too funny! Love it. Thanks for stopping in. :)

John Gondolf

January 4, 2018 at 3:36 PM

Nicely done, Rhoda, sorry you missed out on the contest. That's what happens when you procrastinate :) John

Rhoda Tripp

January 4, 2018 at 3:44 PM

And thank you too, Dearheart.

Rhoda Tripp

January 4, 2018 at 3:43 PM

It most certainly does. Soup mail me later to ask how much of my novel I have written. Lol.

Paul Callus

January 4, 2018 at 3:13 PM

Oh what a pity you missed out on the contest, Rhoda! Undoubtedly this would have made the grade. Silly me...and I always thought that the dwip was a dance! Regards // paul

Paul Callus

January 5, 2018 at 5:09 AM

..a gem with many rough edges!!

Rhoda Tripp

January 4, 2018 at 3:42 PM

After I originally wrote it, I added the "dwip" because people weren't understanding the "all white" (all right) and "wane" (rain). So there ya have it, Paul. The inner workings of an out of the box mind. Lol. Thanks so much my friend for your loyal support. I hope you know you're a gem.