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Monochromatic Blue

blue swells sink and rise albatross sail endless skies... deep mournful voice cries

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Date: 3/11/2011 1:10:00 AM
I really like this one. It seems very haiku for me with that ending line the way it is!
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Date: 3/10/2011 9:49:00 AM
aw the ocean blue, the albatross is such a clumsy bird whne landing though, but when they fly they take the sky. great haiku Rob A Cop (:P)
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