Monochromatic Blue

blue swells sink and rise
albatross sail endless skies...
deep mournful voice cries
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
March 11, 2011 at 1:10 AM
I really like this one. It seems very haiku for me with that ending line the way it is!
Arteaga Avatar
March 10, 2011 at 9:49 AM
aw the ocean blue, the albatross is such a clumsy bird whne landing though, but when they fly they take the sky. great haiku Rob A Cop (:P)
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