Brian Strand Poet Monoku

Monku Sequence-For What We Are About To Receive

sizzling sausage in a pan -
                           breakfast sounds alert the inner man

hot,freshly baking bread -
                           aromas of a lunchbreak spread

spit roast turning slow -
                           sight of dinner on the go

mouthful of merlot fine-
                         upon the tongue the taste of wine

thanksgiving supper meal -
                           a touch of fellowship so real

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Sharon Winter July 24, 2008 at 7:04 AM Mouth watering. A grateful, uplifting and inviting write. Love, Shar

Michael Degenhardt July 24, 2008 at 5:48 AM I agree with Kristin, that it sounds scrumptuous. However, the wine has no place at my table, but I am a believer in breaking bread. Terrific form and sentiment in this my friend. Michael

Kristin Reynolds July 24, 2008 at 3:37 AM Mmmmmm, this sounds devine, after all the hospital food, my mouth is watering. :) I thank you dear, for your prayers for my Michael, Much love, Kristin