Monk Mode

not only not counting
even forgetting
milestones 
we are wonderstruck as spirit
beauteously consciousness hones

behold how a flower blossoms
unfolding petal by petal 
likewise we too ascend
the only doing we do
is will to God’s magnetism bend

life unfolds by itself
replay of what is already impulsed
déjà vu experiences confirms our view
yet our heart takes delight
in imbibing each new bliss beat hue
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Villalon Avatar
September 2, 2023 at 9:19 PM
I once dreamed to be a monk, but never was. Your many poems speak in different words... and never missed acknowledging God's presence! :)
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September 3, 2023 at 12:53 AM
All that is, is God’s presence
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