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Moments that count

Moments that count, are those bliss drenched Joy makes us feel complete Both fear and desire, from heart wrenched Our head’s laid at God’s feet Rapturous and aglow In tranquil stillness slow Ceasing seeking we flow Horse of love mount Moments that count

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Date: 2/22/2024 9:12:00 AM
Brilliant is the usual form you invented. Pity it is not included by PS in the list of forms. A lovely poem that is indeed rapturous.
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Date: 2/22/2024 6:53:00 PM
Thank you, Victor dear. Hope you are doing well.
Date: 2/22/2024 1:05:00 AM
Poetry form ~ Quietus
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