Unseeking Seeker Poet Rhyme

Moments that count

Moments that count, are those bliss drenched
Joy makes us feel complete
Both fear and desire, from heart wrenched
Our head’s laid at God’s feet

Rapturous and aglow
In tranquil stillness slow 
Ceasing seeking we flow 

Horse of love mount
Moments that count

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Victor Buhagiar February 22, 2024 at 9:12 AM Brilliant is the usual form you invented. Pity it is not included by PS in the list of forms. A lovely poem that is indeed rapturous. Unseeking Seeker February 22, 2024 at 6:53 PM Thank you, Victor dear. Hope you are doing well.

Unseeking Seeker February 22, 2024 at 1:05 AM Poetry form ~ Quietus