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Something exceptional in this world of written words we once shared Minutes turned into hours spent opened hearts soon had cared Consequences meaningful or at least they were to me Nights you spent in my dreams, from you I could not be free Craved your music evermore, your voice did not deceive Knowing the gentle touch of our lips would be heaven to receive Special moments scribbled back and forth left an everlasting impression Ultimately accomplished only left me to then question Still generously and unhesitatingly I relaxed walls I built Realizing the extraordinary good fortune not guilt When you left soon my words lost meaning soon it was unveiled Tidal volume of pain within me as i then exhaled Unique love unlikely, possibilities were now dismissed Leaving me heartbroken, dagger in my chest as you twist

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Date: 5/26/2021 6:47:00 PM
Oh, the agony of 'the tidal wave of pain,' Brenda. Deeply felt. You've penned waves of emotion. ~ Joy Forever, Gershon
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 5/27/2021 9:43:00 PM
Ahh yes gershon the dreaded heart ache of the break lol! Thank you my dear friend!;)
Date: 5/25/2021 8:48:00 PM
WoW! Brenda, You have penned such a well-written write on a bad breakup. The aftermath of a toxic relationship can bring much devastation; however, time heals all wounds. This what I got from reading your poem. Well done. PS, It’s good to see you posting again. Have a wonderful evening:-) Alexis
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 5/27/2021 9:42:00 PM
You are so right Alexis naile it! Thank you for the read and yes I am happy to be back too! Thank you!;)