Moments of You

at this moment
thinking of you
scared of commitment
mind around you

senses tell me no
my soul drawls me
I just don't know
your name follows me

like the sun comes
like the wind blows
giving warm feelings
thoughts of you flow

through the darkest hour
I think of you
reality chances may sour
then I really knew

I go on with life
with many choices
days go by
with these voices
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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November 29, 2010 at 11:31 AM
May your week bring you good health,may your heart overflow with love, and may your life bring you amazing inspiration to continue your writing. I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry this morning and thank you for sharing it Jennifer. Love, Carol
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