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Ripples on the water drift on by Lilly pads flip around on top, in the air Surrounded by beautiful dragonflies I stand by the water, beneath me, I stare At Whirligig beetles darting on the surface Little fish, making circles all around Butterflies visit purple flowers they kiss It is a peaceful, warm, place I have found Taking in the quick moments before I must go Saying bye to the Goldenrod plant, waving at me so These are the special moments to keep, that please These moments I hold onto, moments like these Heidi Sands 8/1/17

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Date: 8/3/2017 4:20:00 PM
How lovely Heidi :)
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/3/2017 4:33:00 PM
Thank you, Gary :)
Date: 8/3/2017 3:07:00 PM
Beautiful moments Heidi...best wishes
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/3/2017 3:16:00 PM
Thank you Joseph :)
Date: 8/3/2017 2:25:00 PM
Glad I found this quaint little poem tonight...imparts such a lovely warm feeling throughout; really it is all rather charming, Heidi - Very well done! My very best regards. :) john
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/3/2017 2:32:00 PM
Thank you so much John. I am happy you liked it :)
Date: 8/3/2017 11:57:00 AM
Lovely thoughts!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/3/2017 12:00:00 PM
Thank you , Kim :)
Date: 8/3/2017 11:31:00 AM
Beautiful imagery Heidi. I hope you don't mind, I hung out in this special place of yours for a while. Great poem! I especially like the ending. -- Dean
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Date: 8/3/2017 11:01:00 AM
A place you don't want to leave... wonderful imagery Heidi
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Date: 8/3/2017 11:01:00 AM
Exactly Tim. Thank you :)
Date: 8/3/2017 8:49:00 AM
I really loved this write my friend! You have written a glorious and stunning poem this morning, and I really enjoyed reading it today! Such a nature-inspired, sentimental-peaceful piece! Great Work!!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/3/2017 8:51:00 AM
Thank you Russell for all your kind , encouraging, supportive comments. I appreciate it :)

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