Notes About The Poem

Haiku poetry:

Moments in Passing

1. Whisper of Tides

Soft tides brush the shore,
stars tumble through endless dark,
feet sink in cool sand.

2. Spring's Awakening

New buds lean skyward,
first light glows on their faces—
spring stirs from her sleep.

3. Echoes at Dusk

Empty room at dusk,
footsteps echo, fading slow—
a chill settles in.

4. The Question

Stepping on dry leaves,
I turn to see my child’s face—
a quiet question.

5. Morning’s Breath

Footsteps in cold grass,
breath mingles with morning’s chill,
frost melts underfoot.

6. Autumn’s Embrace

Orange leaves tumble,
settling close like warm embers —
autumn’s gentle fall.
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Rose  Avatar
December 15, 2024 at 2:37 PM
Your are very good at writing them and I derive much pleasure in reading each one. thank you for sharing dear poet !
Riveraalmena Avatar
December 15, 2024 at 2:59 PM
Thank you!
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