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Haiku poetry:

1. Whisper of Tides Soft tides brush the shore, stars tumble through endless dark, feet sink in cool sand. 2. Spring's Awakening New buds lean skyward, first light glows on their faces— spring stirs from her sleep. 3. Echoes at Dusk Empty room at dusk, footsteps echo, fading slow— a chill settles in. 4. The Question Stepping on dry leaves, I turn to see my child’s face— a quiet question. 5. Morning’s Breath Footsteps in cold grass, breath mingles with morning’s chill, frost melts underfoot. 6. Autumn’s Embrace Orange leaves tumble, settling close like warm embers — autumn’s gentle fall.

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Date: 12/15/2024 2:37:00 PM
Your are very good at writing them and I derive much pleasure in reading each one. thank you for sharing dear poet !
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Ramon Riveraalmena
Date: 12/15/2024 2:59:00 PM
Thank you!

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