Moments In Pain

I remember the days
Swifter than Usain Bolt
When they skimmed past
Without a glimpse of joy
The moments in pain
When a thick cloud
Settled over my dream
And deep darkness
Swallowed up my vision

It is of moments in my life
When pain was rife
With no peep of brightness
But the deep of darkness
Of my moments in pain
When my life was pale
With no glimpse of dawn
But bounds of downs
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Agustin Avatar
March 24, 2024 at 5:38 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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February 7, 2016 at 12:30 AM
well done,. LINDA
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September 12, 2015 at 7:46 AM
Nikita,, awesome write! I enjoyed reading this poem. Skat
Andresen Avatar
June 11, 2013 at 2:32 AM
- Painful topic, very well written Nikita. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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