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Moments' Grace

meandering creek reaches conclusion finds silence and reverence in shadow of seclusion subdued light gives deference off road and traveled way finds silence and reverence in shadows secrets stay as the land knows no time off road and traveled way in reflections it finds divine the creek finds its place as the land knows no time moments spent give moments’ grace time blessed and true as the creek finds its place meandering creek reaches its conclusion subdued light gives deference in shadows secrets stay in reflections it finds divine moments spent give moments’ grace

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Date: 8/2/2011 10:02:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest Mike. I wish you the best in the final round. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/23/2011 6:13:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Mike. Love, Carol
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Mike Bayles
Date: 6/27/2011 5:43:00 PM
Thank you for your nice comment. Comments like yours add to the fun of having my poems posted.
Date: 6/22/2011 5:49:00 PM
Congrats Mike, on "Moments' Grace" being featured. Vince
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Mike Bayles
Date: 6/27/2011 5:44:00 PM
Thank you for your nice comment, Vince. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem.
Date: 4/25/2011 7:17:00 AM
I feel so calm and peaceful reading this, so beautifully written, Mike. Well done.
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Date: 3/10/2011 1:03:00 PM
You have written a very beautiful poem with nice expressions but I think you look into the form of Villanelle
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