Moments

Life is filled with love and hate
But isn’t it good things come to those who wait 
This is wrong 
You waited too long 
Now you stand between life and death
Death choose you 
At the peak of your last breath 
You think of the things you never got to do
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Agustin Avatar
September 29, 2026 at 7:11 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
artly Avatar
September 24, 2026 at 7:35 AM
I've really been enjoying your poem and the emotions and imagery were so vivid that i could easily picture them as beautiful illustration. I'm a commission-based manga/webtoon artist,and I’d love to discuss the possibility of bringing this poem to life if you're ever interested. Feel free to reach out at gm@il : akiracomicart2@ or on inst@: akiraa_artly
Hudson  Avatar
June 28, 2018 at 9:42 PM
Awesome, sometimes short is sweeter.
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