Moment Spent With a Mermaid

Under the sparkling waterfall, cascades of rushing amber waves. A breathless spirit of invigorating grace - she fades. Just as quick, she reappears, with cockle shells dancing upon her bikini’d breast. The mermaid sways my sigh, with a melody that no mortal can slay. With splendid scales of jade and gold,she riles the deep. The briny sea swallows her whole — but then she sweet talks the whirlpool. Such beauty gargles and spouts like a whale as rainbow fish frantically scurry and sail to their slippery domain. The half-clad fish trills once more, than heartily laughs as she tells me the secrets of her lovers. This lass with two sea legs leans to her tell. “I wait ‘til the bloke knocks himself out or nearly drowns or until he drinks himself over the side of his charter.” We cackle together, Galia and I, as tears cascade down the buoyant cheeks of sea pals. 9/23/2019 MERMAIDS Poetry Contest Sponsor: Line Gauthier

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Date: 10/10/2019 6:04:00 AM
Beautiful imagery, well done :-) x
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/10/2019 6:50:00 AM
Thank you, sweet poet!
Date: 9/27/2019 1:31:00 AM
I am intrigued by this one. Think it should be one of those epic poems that have part ii, part iii, part iv, part v, etc.
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Date: 9/24/2019 8:00:00 AM
Oh my, this is quite the Mermaid tale. I will be cautious the next time I am at sea. It’s a good thing she’s wearing those shells or I would be the first man overboard. ;0)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/24/2019 8:28:00 AM
LOL!! Love it, Richard!
Date: 9/24/2019 7:44:00 AM
Oh Well Done Kim. Wonderful Imagery. Loved every word. I'm sure it's a winner. God Bless, JB
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/24/2019 8:28:00 AM
Thanks, Judy!
Date: 9/24/2019 6:58:00 AM
What a fantastic poetic fantasy this was. I found myself sitting on the water's edge watching this play out. Beautifully done Kim
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Chris Green
Date: 9/24/2019 10:01:00 AM
Well....I had my suspicions. : )
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/24/2019 8:29:00 AM
Thank you, Chris! I bet you didn’t know mermaid’s were so mischievous. ;)
Date: 9/23/2019 11:19:00 PM
such incredible imagery Kim, I thoroughly enjoyed your charming fishy tale:-) hugs Jan xx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/24/2019 8:30:00 AM
Thank you, my fine funny poet!
Date: 9/23/2019 11:14:00 PM
This is such a wonderful entry. I enjoyed reading it so much and wish you all the best in the contest. It's awesome. God bless you
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/23/2019 11:15:00 PM
Thank you so much, dear friend!
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