Moment Spent With a Mermaid

Under the sparkling waterfall, cascades of rushing amber waves. A breathless spirit of invigorating grace - she fades. Just as quick, she reappears, with cockle shells dancing upon her bikini’d breast. The mermaid sways my sigh, with a melody that no mortal can slay. With splendid scales of jade and gold,she riles the deep. The briny sea swallows her whole — but then she sweet talks the whirlpool. Such beauty gargles and spouts like a whale as rainbow fish frantically scurry and sail to their slippery domain. The half-clad fish trills once more, than heartily laughs as she tells me the secrets of her lovers. This lass with two sea legs leans to her tell. “I wait ‘til the bloke knocks himself out or nearly drowns or until he drinks himself over the side of his charter.” We cackle together, Galia and I, as tears cascade down the buoyant cheeks of sea pals. 9/23/2019 MERMAIDS Poetry Contest Sponsor: Line Gauthier
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Perrin Avatar
October 10, 2019 at 6:04 AM
Beautiful imagery, well done :-) x
Rodrigues Avatar
October 10, 2019 at 6:50 AM
Thank you, sweet poet!
Krutsinger Avatar
September 27, 2019 at 1:31 AM
I am intrigued by this one. Think it should be one of those epic poems that have part ii, part iii, part iv, part v, etc.
Lamoureux Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 8:00 AM
Oh my, this is quite the Mermaid tale. I will be cautious the next time I am at sea. It’s a good thing she’s wearing those shells or I would be the first man overboard. ;0)
Rodrigues Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 8:28 AM
LOL!! Love it, Richard!
Ball Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 7:44 AM
Oh Well Done Kim. Wonderful Imagery. Loved every word. I'm sure it's a winner. God Bless, JB
Rodrigues Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 8:28 AM
Thanks, Judy!
Green Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 6:58 AM
What a fantastic poetic fantasy this was. I found myself sitting on the water's edge watching this play out. Beautifully done Kim
Green Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 10:01 AM
Well....I had my suspicions. : )
Rodrigues Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 8:29 AM
Thank you, Chris! I bet you didn’t know mermaid’s were so mischievous. ;)
Allison Avatar
September 23, 2019 at 11:19 PM
such incredible imagery Kim, I thoroughly enjoyed your charming fishy tale:-) hugs Jan xx
Rodrigues Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 8:30 AM
Thank you, my fine funny poet!
Mcintosh Avatar
September 23, 2019 at 11:14 PM
This is such a wonderful entry. I enjoyed reading it so much and wish you all the best in the contest. It's awesome. God bless you
Rodrigues Avatar
September 23, 2019 at 11:15 PM
Thank you so much, dear friend!
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