Moment of Exhilarating Taste

I took one hit and then a few puffs more
I'm waiting for the rush, I'm waiting to explore
Into my mind of eternal bliss
the moment, it stands but does not exist 
I think about that moment and hold it dear
I know it wont last and it slowly dissapears

I take a shack more to get lost in the moment
I look back, close my eyes and seize the moment

the smoke fades but leaves the smell of a exhilarating taste
I clear my mind once more
now it's not eternal but everlasting, taking me in, once more.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Andresen Avatar
June 17, 2013 at 5:50 AM
- Very well written, Elizabeth ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Chibuikem Avatar
March 14, 2013 at 9:42 PM
more than once more...cool wirte-up.
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