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Moment For Love

Your sad eyes made their piercing plea in a forlorn moment of humble reverie I stroked your matted fur so willingly and cradled you as you licked my face gratefully. Written on 4/17/2017

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Date: 6/24/2017 12:11:00 AM
Very nice poem. I was thinking maybe you found a dog. I'm one of those people who will stop to help an animal. Well, unless it's a bear :) Thank you for liking my Light OF Angels :)
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Date: 4/27/2017 2:44:00 AM
That's a lovely poem, Laura. Thanks for sharing. Regards, John.
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Date: 4/25/2017 9:25:00 PM
Hi Laura, Puppy love my little dog Purdy is 17 years old and still is my little puppy:)) Lovely rhyme < hugs
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Laura Leiser
Date: 4/25/2017 10:06:00 PM
Thanks for your kind comments, Niall! I love my sweet dogs so much, too! A lab and a boxer, both 8 years old :)
Date: 4/21/2017 5:01:00 AM
I so love this poem. I have also written somewhat similar to this but its sad. its called "Friends Forever"
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Laura Leiser
Date: 4/21/2017 8:55:00 AM
Thanks, Miraj! I am eager to read your poem, too. :)
Date: 4/18/2017 5:26:00 AM
A charming and delightful poem Laura. I adore dogs. Not actually a monorhyme tho. All ending words need to rhyme with first ending word to be a monorhyme. 7; )
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