Moment

One slight touch from you
and my heart ceases to beat.
The world stops around us,
a sensation elite.
there are stars that surround us 
and snow falls to the ground.
In this nirvana we've created,
we don't hear a sound.
To be lost in a moment 
is dreamlike and rare.
We should no longer deny this,
it wouldn't be fair.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Kendrick Avatar
August 27, 2009 at 6:11 AM
Lines nine and ten are very good. Keep writingl. Sara
Brown Avatar
August 27, 2009 at 6:01 AM
Excellent write Kimberly. Thank you for sharing it with us. Love, Carol
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