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One slight touch from you and my heart ceases to beat. The world stops around us, a sensation elite. there are stars that surround us and snow falls to the ground. In this nirvana we've created, we don't hear a sound. To be lost in a moment is dreamlike and rare. We should no longer deny this, it wouldn't be fair.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/27/2009 6:11:00 AM
Lines nine and ten are very good. Keep writingl. Sara
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Date: 8/27/2009 6:01:00 AM
Excellent write Kimberly. Thank you for sharing it with us. Love, Carol
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