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For Mother, Magical, Moment Words Poetry Contest

Sponsor: Constance La France

Do not dwell in the past, do not dream of the future, concentrate the mind on the present moment. - Buddha

“Do not dwell in the past, do not dream of the future, concentrate the mind on the present moment.” Buddha Mere seconds, minutes or hours comprise each day of your life. Only when unconscious, in a coma or asleep Might you be unaware of life’s pleasantries or strife. Embrace the “now;” enjoy what you can, for time does not come cheap. Nurture the meaningfulness in all that you do, Treasuring each moment God has given you.

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 11/16/2023 12:57:00 PM

Congratulations on your wonderful win. Your "Moment" is a creative Acrostic write. I loved reading this one. Loved "T" the best. "Treasuring each moment God has given you." Have a great/blessed day with your win.....................

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 11/14/2023 4:35:00 PM

a truthful and beautifully written Acrostic. I loved the simplicity filled with powerful words reminding me to treasure all my moments. Well done, Andrea

Paige Hind

Date: 11/14/2023 3:26:00 PM

Very true - your words. :)

Modupe Sefunmi

Date: 11/14/2023 1:21:00 PM

I am glad I stopped by to read this beautiful poem and it spoke directly to my soul. Thanks a lot for the gift of this poem

Jay Narain

Date: 11/14/2023 10:11:00 AM

Excellent poem.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 11/14/2023 10:08:00 AM

I wrote a ghost story and say don't let the woes of tonight spoil your tomorrow. yours is a good lesson for all of us to take heed of - i love your sentence - 'Embrace the now, enjoy what you can, for time does not come cheap' well said my friend. Love and hugs Jennifer.

Ink Empress

Date: 11/14/2023 8:38:00 AM

“ Embrace the “now;” enjoy what you can, for time does not come cheap.”’words of a wise lady that has seen it all, i will keep those words close to my heart, because sometimes we millenials forget to embrace the now hah. I guess we need to practise mindfulness and be grateful for little things always. Your acrostic is powerful wise and moving, loved this tale. Sending you light always