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Golden sets of surfs surface, delves surreal golden sky, Sands surrender shoeless sole soles traipsed a hazy trail, Gold rays graced and heralds-in, as an ochre shore comply, Gild shines serene flocks of doves, day sprung free a summer's veil. Date:08/30/2019 howmanysyllables 4343, 4343, 4343, 4343 (7777)

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Date: 8/30/2019 7:18:00 PM
i love the ocean so i could see this one unfolding...beautiful poem my friend :) hugs
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Date: 8/30/2019 7:23:00 PM
It's a revised poem addressing the Ch'i Yen Shih Chinese format I just learned from Nette's contest--my gratitude I extend to you ~ Aloha William

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