William Kelii Kekaula Poet Rhyme

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Golden sets of
surfs surface, 
delves surreal
golden sky, 

Sands surrender
shoeless sole
soles traipsed a
hazy trail,

Gold rays graced and
heralds-in,
as an ochre
shore comply,

Gild shines serene
flocks of doves,
day sprung free a
summer's veil.


Date:08/30/2019
howmanysyllables
4343, 4343, 4343, 4343 (7777)

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Sandra Adams August 30, 2019 at 7:18 PM i love the ocean so i could see this one unfolding...beautiful poem my friend :) hugs William Kelii Kekaula August 30, 2019 at 7:23 PM It's a revised poem addressing the Ch'i Yen Shih Chinese format I just learned from Nette's contest--my gratitude I extend to you ~ Aloha William