Virginia Gelok Poet Rhyme

Mom Has Left Us

A song was heard
The tune was great.
He spoke to her,
"Come home, it's late".
        So
She has taken a Journey
That could not wait.
Your Mom is standing
At Heavens Gate.
Be glad that she's there,
She suffers no more.
Her pain has all left her
She has knocked at Gods door.
His voice gently beckoned
It guided her above
And as she looks back
She left you her love.

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Caren Krutsinger March 31, 2021 at 7:30 PM My mother is there also. "She has knocked at Gods door. His voice gently beckoned" Well done!

J. Summers March 18, 2021 at 9:43 PM Beautifully written poem Virginia. My mother left on her journey as well and it is comforting knowing both where she is and that she is finally and forever pain free. John