Mom and Her Brother Ray

My mother had nine siblings
Two died young
Survivors were four girls, three boys

Girls were tight
Boys not so much
Four lived to be over eighty

I called Uncle Ray to invite him to Mom’s 80th birthday party
A total surprise to her.
Afterwards, she claimed she had not seen him for forty years.

I had no idea when I phoned him they were estranged.
He lived a mere sixty minutes away
He and his wife both came and glared at everybody.

I thought it would be a joyous reunion
It was not
I figure it will be another forty years
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Bauer Avatar
October 27, 2022 at 1:26 PM
nothing's ever easy when it comes to family, caren! your heart was in the right place...
Krutsinger Avatar
October 27, 2022 at 4:17 PM
I had NO idea! My mother was close-mouthed about everything.
Hankins Avatar
October 27, 2022 at 12:10 PM
He sounds like a real delight, Caren. No wonder they are estranged.
Krutsinger Avatar
October 27, 2022 at 4:18 PM
Hi wife was just as delightful
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