Mom

All my ups and downs. Every smile n every frown. All my lies you believed. With the tears I made you bleed. Through and through a mother always was you. And me a son with actions not so true. While lack of saying I Love You........brought only regrets. Everything that you do will never allow me to forget. So on this day dedicated to you are those words that I always felt, but more yet rarely ever said. Thank you MOM for being you. And if I shall ever forget to say these words. Always remember.................. I LOVE YOU!

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/9/2013 9:41:00 PM

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/9/2013 9:40:00 PM

well this seems to be working, i read the reason you starting writing.. kind of like an anger management thing.. LOL... and by the way, i love your poem s much.. I keep them words on my lips every time i see my mom.. she's in an old folks home... okay sorry to vent.. but you have yourself a great poem here.. xox~ Linda

Adeleke Adeite

Date: 6/8/2013 12:14:00 PM

Words are not always as they seem huh? I love the flow of thought in this piece. You may have to change some 'you' to 'your' in some lines. You are such a budding talent! It's great to read your piece this evening Mark, welcome to the Soup my dear friend. PoetrySoup is a pleasant platform to share your heart and art. Feel free to enter member contests as it will help you gain more exposure and thereby learn. The pages has a lot of features that might interest you. Enjoy your stay. Peace and Friendship, Adeleke