Mom

Words are just words and are 
often too used
Taken for granted and overly 
abused
But what if our actions we 
mean to show good
End in destruction and not as 
they should
When making you proud seems 
harder every day
These are the things to you I 
must say…
Mom, I am sorry.  I wish you 
could see
My dream is for you to be 
proud of me
But the harder I tried to put a 
smile on your face
Again I would fail and remain a 
disgrace
I know it’s not you whose 
expectations were high
They were mine that I placed 
though not knowing why
I guess to make up for all I’ve 
done wrong
It’s clear to me now that may 
take way too long
So here are my words to you 
they hold true
If I fall I’ll get up as long as I 
have you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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February 8, 2016 at 1:40 PM
DEEP WRITE... LINDA
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March 9, 2011 at 6:27 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one of PoetrySoup's contest. The best to you in the finals Kristina. Love Carol
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February 18, 2011 at 12:44 PM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Kristina. Love, Carol
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March 22, 2010 at 7:56 AM
A very nice rhyming poem. You seem to have a good rhythm as well as a good rhyme. I enjoyed the read very much. A great write, thank you for sharing. Caryl
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March 21, 2010 at 5:37 PM
Mother's are always there for us. always forgiving, and love unconditionally. This was a great poem.
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March 21, 2010 at 12:13 PM
I do not know how to feel about this poem it is to precious 4 me. I do not have a mother who can lift me up.. One is gone 4 ever .The other well she is gone out of her mind..In a sad way. I do know This is a very good poem..
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