Molting

Ostracized again
Just as my wings began to mend….
Feathers blow in wind
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Roberts Avatar
September 22, 2010 at 9:29 AM
love it
Mehta Avatar
September 22, 2010 at 8:27 AM
What a wonderful senryu with nice images
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September 22, 2010 at 7:56 AM
Many people will see this as the story of their lives, Robb. Excellent senryu! Also wanted to applaud you for your comments on Chris's blog. I'm afraid Diane is going to leave now. She is new and does not understand the personality issues that come into play here. Thanks for offering a better perspective for her to consider. Love, Carolyn
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