Robert L. Hinshaw Poet Monoku

Molten Gold - a Monoku

river of molten gold seeking glorious heights

Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired
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Placed No. 8 in Rick Parise's "Nature Monoku - Single Line" Contest - Jun 2011

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Carol Sunshine Brown June 9, 2011 at 12:36 PM Congratulations on a well deserved win in Rick Parise's "Nature Monoku" contest Bob. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich June 5, 2011 at 8:23 PM Wonderful win, Robert. COngratulations to you.

Joe Maverick June 5, 2011 at 9:01 AM Sweet and glowing, short.. yet deep.! congratulations Robert on the win.!

Sara Kendrick June 5, 2011 at 5:59 AM Enjoyed reading your winning work..Sara

Debbie Guzzi June 4, 2011 at 2:55 PM congrad's on your win Bob! Light & Love

Linda-Marie Sweetheart June 3, 2011 at 8:35 PM Congrats Bob on your super win with this creative entry for Rick.. well done my friend..luv.

Ralph Taylor June 3, 2011 at 6:30 PM Awesome entry, Sarge. Excellent monoku. Good luck. Ralphie

Emma Mantle June 2, 2011 at 8:31 AM A great entry for the contest Bob. Many thanks for your comments. Best wishes to you in the contest. Em :)

Poet Destroyer A June 1, 2011 at 5:50 PM wow! Enough said.. excellent line,,, Enjoyed and good luck,..p.d.

James Foulk June 1, 2011 at 12:16 PM very creative, enjoyed reading this one, good luck in the contest. Thank you for commenting on Glow Worm in Love, glad you liked it.

Gwendolen Song June 1, 2011 at 9:41 AM This is very relaxing too...molten gold is a captivating description of the picture, Robert! Well done! Gwendolen

Nette Onclaud June 1, 2011 at 8:39 AM a golden taspestry of a write, robert.. jus did mine too.. come visit! winning's best! :) huggs, nette

Kash Poet June 1, 2011 at 1:34 AM Great Monoku here Robert.enjoyed.

Skat A June 1, 2011 at 12:35 AM great monoku Luv*Skat

Andrea Dietrich May 31, 2011 at 8:59 PM wow,I like how you did this! and I enjoyed your taco stories! Luv, Andrea

Mike Dailey May 31, 2011 at 5:57 PM I never heard of a one line poem - interesting. Mike