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Molten Cloud of Memory

The clouds of pathos rose from the sea of sorrow, the storm surged from the horizon of mind’s visage, melted in many streams of tear to torrentially flow like the rushing rills of rain drops on face of foliage. All the clouds didn’t dissolve in the deluge of grief, a solitary clump held the tear drop in emotion deep, like rain drop concealed in the fold of sodden leaf, waited in me to wail for the promises I couldn’t keep. Before the end of our pledged journey you’re gone, forlorn I’ve crumbled in the debris of the fallen sky. The hidden cloud clump melts in remorse I discern, as it upwells within me all the restraints I feel it defy. The spent sun sets in the ruins of my broken heart, my dismal life can’t rise from the dark dust of despair. As the destined time comes for me to finally depart, for you, the cloud of memory melts one last drop of tear.
Written : February 5, 2019 May 28, 2020 Contest : Brian's Choice Y Sponsor : Brian Strand

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Date: 2/7/2019 3:18:00 AM
- Subimal, congratulations on your great winning poem ... writing about tears is a sensitive theme :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/6/2019 1:53:00 PM
The first stanza is brilliant Subimal.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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