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Moldy Cellars

Once when we were young
we thought we could reach 
the rainbow’s treasure,
how life does unteach 

naivety’s first truths,
and does innocence
suffer loss in fires
of meticulous 

rules of behavior,
enshrined by elders
who secret themselves
in moldy cellars?
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