Mold Me

break me  -- reform the old

                            prepare this vessel to receive

                                 the dew of your love



David Meade
11/16/2014
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Date: 6/12/2015 11:46:00 PM
Yes I was gonna mention that!!! I keep looking here for new poems!!!!! cheers
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Date: 6/12/2015 7:47:00 PM
Hi David, I dont think I have ever read 3 more power sentences! Great!
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David Meade
Date: 6/12/2015 11:45:00 PM
Thank-you my friend -- you are most kind. Let's keep writing . . . I have been slacking but your words have inspired me! All the very best!
Date: 3/4/2015 7:31:00 AM
i like it the you chose dew.. :)! wow! so like it.. :)!Sorry for being late to reply been busy these days.. :(! God bless us all.. :)!//olive eloisa
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Date: 12/30/2014 7:40:00 AM
This is very good, I love it!
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Date: 12/7/2014 11:39:00 AM
Wonderful, David!
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Date: 11/20/2014 4:20:00 PM
Absolutely charming!
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David Meade
Date: 11/20/2014 9:17:00 PM
It's a never ending process -- tear it down and build it back up!
Date: 11/18/2014 11:22:00 PM
What a beautiful expression of selfless love David! #7
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David Meade
Date: 11/19/2014 8:51:00 AM
Thank-you for your precious comment -- may your days be filled with light and love!
Date: 11/18/2014 12:48:00 PM
How beautiful this line-the dew of your love.
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David Meade
Date: 11/19/2014 8:53:00 AM
As you well know -- love is sweeter than honey. May His love-dew fill you always.
Date: 11/17/2014 11:27:00 PM
Very nice poem Dave! Enjoyed the read my dear friend. Thank you for visiting my page A 7 from me! :) Love and hugs! xxx D.
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David Meade
Date: 11/19/2014 8:54:00 AM
Thank-you sweet friend -- you are filled with light and love . . . always.
Date: 11/17/2014 12:08:00 PM
I never think of calling it moulding more like nudge in the right directions lol Nice one. love phyl
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David Meade
Date: 11/17/2014 4:36:00 PM
I was being nice -- sometimes hammer and chisel.
Date: 11/17/2014 8:18:00 AM
GREAT! Well done my friend! Have a great day!
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David Meade
Date: 11/17/2014 4:36:00 PM
Everyday is a great day when you can get out of bed!!
Date: 11/17/2014 12:24:00 AM
Marvelous and uplifting dear David!
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David Meade
Date: 11/17/2014 4:37:00 PM
Thank-you my dear word friend!
Date: 11/16/2014 10:22:00 PM
Wonderful, Dave! You say so much in just a few words...I read it as a prayer but could be interpreted many ways...love &blessings, Rhonda
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David Meade
Date: 11/17/2014 4:38:00 PM
You read it correctly -- His love is precious!!
Date: 11/16/2014 7:55:00 PM
Great last line! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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David Meade
Date: 11/17/2014 4:39:00 PM
Thank-you my friend . . . may His love fill you always!
Date: 11/16/2014 12:03:00 PM
It's perfect 7 David. XXX rajat
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Date: 11/16/2014 12:02:00 PM
One of David's best. COMPLETE SURRENDER. It may be the God or your girlfriend I do not know David but the message is straight. I give 7 and add it to my fav. One of the best I have read so far.Love XXXX rajat
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David Meade
Date: 11/17/2014 4:40:00 PM
It is God my friend -- and my his blessings flow richly to you!
Date: 11/16/2014 11:32:00 AM
- Great written in a few words, David! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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David Meade
Date: 11/17/2014 4:40:00 PM
Thank-you for you kind visit -- love and light always.
Date: 11/16/2014 9:10:00 AM
lovely sentiment here David - guess people do need rebuilding after a broken relationship - great write:-) Hugs jan xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 11/17/2014 4:49:00 PM
Thanks so much David:-) I am in a happy place at the moment:-) Hope I can stay there a while longer! Hugs jan xx
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David Meade
Date: 11/17/2014 4:42:00 PM
I am always breaking down -- so the rebuilding is constant!! You and your family are in my prayers. Peace.
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