Mold Me

break me  -- reform the old

                            prepare this vessel to receive

                                 the dew of your love



David Meade
11/16/2014
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lovei do not know?

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Arthur Vaso

June 12, 2015 at 11:46 PM

Yes I was gonna mention that!!! I keep looking here for new poems!!!!! cheers

Arthur Vaso

June 12, 2015 at 7:47 PM

Hi David, I dont think I have ever read 3 more power sentences! Great!

David Meade

June 12, 2015 at 11:45 PM

Thank-you my friend -- you are most kind. Let's keep writing . . . I have been slacking but your words have inspired me! All the very best!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

March 4, 2015 at 7:31 AM

i like it the you chose dew.. :)! wow! so like it.. :)!Sorry for being late to reply been busy these days.. :(! God bless us all.. :)!//olive eloisa

Casarah Nance

December 30, 2014 at 7:40 AM

This is very good, I love it!

Andrea Dietrich

December 7, 2014 at 11:39 AM

Wonderful, David!

Maurice Yvonne

November 20, 2014 at 4:20 PM

Absolutely charming!

David Meade

November 20, 2014 at 9:17 PM

It's a never ending process -- tear it down and build it back up!

Connie Marcum Wong

November 18, 2014 at 11:22 PM

What a beautiful expression of selfless love David! #7

David Meade

November 19, 2014 at 8:51 AM

Thank-you for your precious comment -- may your days be filled with light and love!

Charmaine Chircop

November 18, 2014 at 12:48 PM

How beautiful this line-the dew of your love.

David Meade

November 19, 2014 at 8:53 AM

As you well know -- love is sweeter than honey. May His love-dew fill you always.

Dorian Petersen Potter

November 17, 2014 at 11:27 PM

Very nice poem Dave! Enjoyed the read my dear friend. Thank you for visiting my page A 7 from me! :) Love and hugs! xxx D.

David Meade

November 19, 2014 at 8:54 AM

Thank-you sweet friend -- you are filled with light and love . . . always.

Phyllis Babcock

November 17, 2014 at 12:08 PM

I never think of calling it moulding more like nudge in the right directions lol Nice one. love phyl

David Meade

November 17, 2014 at 4:36 PM

I was being nice -- sometimes hammer and chisel.

Jack Ellison

November 17, 2014 at 8:18 AM

GREAT! Well done my friend! Have a great day!

David Meade

November 17, 2014 at 4:36 PM

Everyday is a great day when you can get out of bed!!

Demetrios Trifiatis

November 17, 2014 at 12:24 AM

Marvelous and uplifting dear David!

David Meade

November 17, 2014 at 4:37 PM

Thank-you my dear word friend!

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

November 16, 2014 at 10:22 PM

Wonderful, Dave! You say so much in just a few words...I read it as a prayer but could be interpreted many ways...love &blessings, Rhonda

David Meade

November 17, 2014 at 4:38 PM

You read it correctly -- His love is precious!!

Matthew Anish

November 16, 2014 at 7:55 PM

Great last line! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

David Meade

November 17, 2014 at 4:39 PM

Thank-you my friend . . . may His love fill you always!

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

November 16, 2014 at 12:03 PM

It's perfect 7 David. XXX rajat

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

November 16, 2014 at 12:02 PM

One of David's best. COMPLETE SURRENDER. It may be the God or your girlfriend I do not know David but the message is straight. I give 7 and add it to my fav. One of the best I have read so far.Love XXXX rajat

David Meade

November 17, 2014 at 4:40 PM

It is God my friend -- and my his blessings flow richly to you!