Molasses

if i drank coffee i'd ask her to come swim in my cup she's better then cane better then maple she's brown sugar

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Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 4/9/2020 9:26:00 AM

I once dated a milk chocolate "David". He was too intelligent and too attractive for his own good. I ran the other way, just too dangerous. Lovely sipping this poem though. xomo

Jeff Connelly
Date: 4/9/2020 7:08:00 PM

My 1st wife, in blackness lol, was considered "red boned" as far as her skin tone. A great friend of mine once said, "Jeff, you are the most bigoted man I know." This completely threw me off since first wife was black/current wife Japanese. But he followed up his statement by saying, "Jeff, you are so bigoted because you won't marry a white woman!!!" LOL

Jeff Connelly
Date: 4/9/2020 11:12:00 AM

Thank you Maureen. I woke this morning to see all these emails that a comment was made on a bunch of my poems. LOL. Thanks so much Maureen.