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Mohan's Rhyme Schema

Once in Hong Kong I sang a song Chong ‘n Wong pulled along Choir it became strong Lifelong those throngs now belong Once I was assigned to refine a mime I pined to realign the divine design Couldn’t shine it brine ‘n it was supine Was left to whine, wine and dine Once Jack ‘n Black couldn’t crack a sack I was called back to pack them whack ‘n search for Mac ‘n Quack in the track To attack the remaining knick knack Once jolly Dolly wanted to lick a lolly She waited for the lolly trolley with Polly Trolley was stolen by Ali the smalley Dolly realized the folly, went without a lolly Once a teen queen preened the greens She cleaned the beans to feed the knight The knight in jeans came in to glean the creame Both sat in the canteen to have plenty caffeine Hong Kong, song, Chong, Wong, along, strong, lifelong, throng, belong assign, refine, mime, pine realign, divine design, shine, brine, supine, wine, whine, dine Jack, Black, crack, sack, back, pack, whack, Mac, Quack, track, attack, knack jolly, Dolly, lolly, trolley, Polly, Ali, smalley, folly teen queen, preen, green, clean, bean, jean, glean, creame, canteen, caffeine 6.7.2014

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Date: 7/14/2014 1:23:00 AM
Hi Mohan, Congratulations, on your awesome win. Love Linda
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Date: 7/11/2014 1:18:00 PM
Congratulations, Mohan, on your placement.
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 7/12/2014 9:45:00 AM
Thanks Faye for your wishes. Mohan
Date: 7/11/2014 12:29:00 PM
Lol! Impressive, Mohan! Congrats on a great win! Hugs.. Arlene
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 7/12/2014 9:46:00 AM
Arlene, thanks again for your warm encouragement. Mohan
Date: 7/10/2014 7:27:00 AM
Very entertaining, congratulations.
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 7/12/2014 9:46:00 AM
Richard, glad you liked it. Mohan
Date: 7/10/2014 6:57:00 AM
That's awesome Mohan! How well u hv been able to put up wid this one,, great talent! Congrats on big win!
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 7/12/2014 9:48:00 AM
Upma, gradually learning from you all in the soup and the warm encouragement that you send always. Mohan
Date: 7/10/2014 3:41:00 AM
:D I like the one with the lolly parts ?Mohan my friend ...:D love it!! Kudos my friend..:)
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 7/12/2014 9:50:00 AM
Olive, my sweet friend, thanks for your wishes. Mohan
Date: 7/9/2014 11:22:00 PM
Very well Mr. Mohan. You placed as you knew you would. Congratulations on winning in my contest... Verlena
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 7/10/2014 12:54:00 AM
thanks Verlena for your placement of my poem in your contest. Mohan
Date: 7/6/2014 11:01:00 AM
Well done Mohan...This was a tough one...Tim
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 7/6/2014 11:26:00 AM
Tim, do you think I have been able to do some justice to it? Mohan

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