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Mohan's Rhyme Schema

Once in Hong Kong I sang a song
Chong ‘n Wong pulled along
Choir it became strong
Lifelong those throngs now belong

Once I was assigned to refine a mime
I pined to realign the divine design
Couldn’t shine it brine ‘n it was supine
Was left to whine, wine and dine

Once Jack ‘n Black couldn’t crack a sack
I was called back to pack them whack
‘n search for Mac ‘n Quack in the track 
To attack the remaining knick knack

Once jolly Dolly wanted to lick a lolly
She waited for the lolly trolley with Polly
Trolley was stolen by Ali the smalley
Dolly realized the folly, went without a lolly

Once a teen queen preened the greens
She cleaned the beans to feed the knight
The knight in jeans came in to glean the creame
Both sat in the canteen to have plenty caffeine 


Hong Kong, song, Chong, Wong, along, strong, lifelong, throng, belong
assign, refine, mime, pine realign, divine design, shine, brine, supine, wine, 
whine, dine
Jack, Black, crack, sack, back, pack, whack, Mac, Quack, track, attack, knack
jolly, Dolly, lolly, trolley, Polly, Ali, smalley, folly
teen queen, preen, green, clean, bean, jean, glean, creame, canteen, caffeine

6.7.2014

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 7/14/2014 1:23:00 AM
Hi Mohan, Congratulations, on your awesome win. Love Linda
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Date: 7/11/2014 1:18:00 PM
Congratulations, Mohan, on your placement.
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 7/12/2014 9:45:00 AM
Thanks Faye for your wishes. Mohan
Date: 7/11/2014 12:29:00 PM
Lol! Impressive, Mohan! Congrats on a great win! Hugs.. Arlene
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 7/12/2014 9:46:00 AM
Arlene, thanks again for your warm encouragement. Mohan
Date: 7/10/2014 7:27:00 AM
Very entertaining, congratulations.
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 7/12/2014 9:46:00 AM
Richard, glad you liked it. Mohan
Date: 7/10/2014 6:57:00 AM
That's awesome Mohan! How well u hv been able to put up wid this one,, great talent! Congrats on big win!
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 7/12/2014 9:48:00 AM
Upma, gradually learning from you all in the soup and the warm encouragement that you send always. Mohan
Date: 7/10/2014 3:41:00 AM
:D I like the one with the lolly parts ?Mohan my friend ...:D love it!! Kudos my friend..:)
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 7/12/2014 9:50:00 AM
Olive, my sweet friend, thanks for your wishes. Mohan
Date: 7/9/2014 11:22:00 PM
Very well Mr. Mohan. You placed as you knew you would. Congratulations on winning in my contest... Verlena
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 7/10/2014 12:54:00 AM
thanks Verlena for your placement of my poem in your contest. Mohan
Date: 7/6/2014 11:01:00 AM
Well done Mohan...This was a tough one...Tim
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 7/6/2014 11:26:00 AM
Tim, do you think I have been able to do some justice to it? Mohan

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