Modest Heaven

A picture perfect
Heaven beheld modestly
Grass and sky alike
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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June 28, 2009 at 10:59 PM
Yes, heaven can be found everywhere in nature. Lovely haiku, Jen! Love, Carolyn
Haniff Avatar
June 27, 2009 at 2:07 PM
wow! this is a lovely right Jen!.....long time no chat...lol.....a lovely picture painted here in this haiku......love n smiles Maryam*
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June 26, 2009 at 4:15 PM
What an uplifting view. Much said in just three lines. Thank you for sharing your poem with us. Keep on writing. Karen
Shango Avatar
June 26, 2009 at 3:08 PM
Beauty must be perfect harmony ... and from your heart it comes. Good write.
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