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Modern Tyrants

Political Games Played over the dying Trophy of decay.

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Leah Yoho

Date: 11/14/2008 7:40:00 AM

This is a great haiku! congradulations on being chosen. I loved it, but I think you need one more sylable in the center line. Leah

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 11/11/2008 8:52:00 PM

Alison, Congratulations on YOURPOEM "Modern Tyrants" being Featured this week Haiku says so much when written with thought as this is Y OU are quite Talented LOVEYOUr PEN...HG

Carrie Richards

Date: 11/11/2008 5:40:00 PM

Well said, a short few words! ~ Congratulations on being featured this week! ~ Carrie

Sharon Winter

Date: 11/10/2008 7:56:00 AM

Perfectly stated. Congratulations Alison on an excellent featured write. Love, Shar

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/10/2008 3:58:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved poem being featured this week.Love, Carol

Date: 11/9/2008 5:00:00 PM

Powerful message carried in just three lines. I just wanted to drop by and add congratulations on having your poem featured to my other comments. Wishing you continued success. Karen

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 11/9/2008 4:35:00 PM

This Haiku sums it up. Short, sweet and honest. Congratulations on it being featured. "Modern Tyrants" says much in few words. Vince

Date: 10/23/2008 3:15:00 PM

So much truth shared in just three lines. Interesting use of alliteration. Keep on writing. Karen

Robin Dewalt

Date: 10/21/2008 6:49:00 PM

How right you are! Excellent. Ghetto