Modern Painted Ship On Painted Ocean
Modernity focuses a painted ship on the painted ocean
Only color and fashion, no air, no speed or no motion
It is not Coleridge's The Rime Of The Ancient Mariner
But modern ship like society's stagnant sea and river.
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