Moonbee Canady Poet Senryu

' Modern Moses (For John Freeman) ... ' 45th Senryu

That One, Parts Red Sea
This One … Now Points To Set Free
           Moses’ Poetry …

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Because Of Your Shining Faith-Light
            Day and Night
              Always On
        Truck-Drivin' Home

      On Highway (or) Space
      You Share God's Grace
        That Circle So Bright
    (Just Like MoonBee's Light  -  smile)

                God Bless You Moses
                           
                             MoonBee

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P P November 24, 2009 at 3:06 AM 'Moses the Man of God (psalm 90)

Carolyn Devonshire November 23, 2009 at 9:14 PM God bless YOU, MoonBee for writing such a fitting tribute to our spiritual leader here on the Soup. Moses is indeed a shining "faith-light" who brings comfort and shares God's grace with all of us. Terrific dedication. I like the image of him parting the Red Sea. Love it! Happy Thanksgiving, Carolyn

Marty Owens November 23, 2009 at 8:22 PM Very nice...enjoyed reading tonight...Marty

John Freeman November 23, 2009 at 8:04 PM Such an honor MoonBee, to have one besides myself who can see and flow together in the light of God's love. As Moses parted the Red Sea, maybe I can part the illusion of darkness, so other may see what I can see. Smile. Sincere, Love, Moses

Jared Pickett November 23, 2009 at 6:47 PM Awesome tribute in Senryu to capture the "Moses" image.... I am sure He will be absolutely thrilled when he reads..... Awesome write sweet Moonbee...:JP]