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Ancient God extended his hand towards this beauty, pulling her close unto him, moulding her voluminous figure with ample bosom into his embrace As his hands tried to memorize every inch of her small waist, to reluctantly travel upward to touch her flawless face He brushed aside a long dark wavy auburn lock that lit up beneath the sun's hot rays Her eyes, amazed him at the multitude of colored flakes that danced in them so bright Fire burned deep within them showing she had fight Yes Aphrodite would be envious of this beautiful breathtaking sight For where doeth this vision hail from Pure perfection t'was what she was A soft sigh escaped her pouty full lips tinted a deep red rose She had a small upturned nose and cheeks set high, soft but fierce tilted upward chin T'was her God-like beauty that had drawn him in Her accent perplexed him as her sultry seductive voice said "Alas I am but modern woman... our words don't even mix!" He leaned forward taking in her very scent to whisper in her ear.... "T'would be an easy fix..!" Ah to explore her curvaceous beauty he would most assuredly spend days Adonis then whispered "Fair Lady, pray tell, what is thy name...?" With just one word t'ween parted full lips "Helen....." t'was what came

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Date: 1/20/2020 12:29:00 PM
Sometimes your poems make me sweat, Brenda--in a good way! And t'is nice to see a poet who knows mythology ! Congrats
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/20/2020 9:51:00 PM
LJ they do huh! Lol well thank you I guess I've done my job! Thank you so much!;)
Date: 1/18/2020 8:21:00 PM
wonderful write Brenda, congratulations on your top win :)
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/20/2020 9:51:00 PM
Sandy thank you so much!;)
Date: 1/18/2020 6:03:00 PM
Beautifully written Brenda, congratulations.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/20/2020 9:50:00 PM
Gary thanks much appreciated!;)
Date: 1/18/2020 5:01:00 PM
This is one of your best! I love the revelation in the last line - so well done. Love the interplay between the two voices. Congratulations my friend!
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/20/2020 9:50:00 PM
Ahh thanks Sam I am glad you enjoyed it!;)
Date: 1/18/2020 3:45:00 PM
Gorgeous poem, Brenda:-) I also wrote a poem referencing Helen of Troy. It's called "Your Face Could Launch A Thousand Ships", but your poem is better. Congratulations!
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/20/2020 9:49:00 PM
Thank you Edward!;)
Date: 1/5/2020 4:21:00 AM
Very well done. God bless you.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/5/2020 4:57:00 AM
Thank you!;)
Date: 1/5/2020 12:38:00 AM
WOW ! GREAT.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/5/2020 3:32:00 AM
Thank you Anisha so very much!;)
Date: 1/4/2020 10:45:00 PM
Wayne's said it all (below) What can I possibly add?! ~ Silenced
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/5/2020 12:21:00 AM
haha thank you my friend! Lol!;)
Date: 1/4/2020 9:41:00 AM
Helen of Troy? Said to have been the most beautiful woman in the world, hope my interpretation is right. A wonderful seductive write, a beautiful romantic poem! Blessing dear Brenda, Jennifer.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/4/2020 9:57:00 AM
Yes you are so right!;) lol I'm glad someone caught that! Thank you so very much!;) I was debating on if I wanted to continue the story or not!;)
Date: 1/4/2020 8:26:00 AM
Ooh la la, this is another hot one. You had me from start to finish. Hugs Rick.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/4/2020 8:47:00 AM
Haha thank you Rick! Appreciate your visit my friend!;)
Date: 1/3/2020 10:27:00 PM
Awesome -JT
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/3/2020 10:30:00 PM
Thanks so much JT!;)

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