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Mockingbirds

I interrupted two mockingbirds a-coupled grey feathers flying.

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Heidi Sands

Date: 10/25/2016 1:13:00 PM

Oh my! Quite the interruption ...lol. You have a way with writing these Haiku ! Nice :)

Kp Nunez

Date: 10/7/2015 9:19:00 PM

Not nice of you... It's a feathery version to coitus interruptus. Did they mock you, hence the interruption? Kidding... Funny haiku! :-)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/14/2013 7:20:00 PM

James, CONGRATULATIONS, on having your poem FEATURED on the soups Home Page:-). Good-Night **Linda**

Skat A

Date: 9/4/2013 6:38:00 PM

James, I like this haiku. The mockingbird happens to be my favorite bird... twahhahahah, and it has nothing to do cause I'm from Texas ;) shame on you for interrupting.. xox~ SKAT

Jim Tidd
Date: 9/4/2013 9:45:00 PM

It was based on a true event. Also, I like that you like Voyager.