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The Mockingbird came out of the running rose and did not look like this bird but trying to look up and face the day..He shook his wings over and over but gave up and turned around and hollered hey woman fix me some breakfast...Sara

Mockingbird

A Mockingbird sits
'pon the running rose shaking...
fall's first cold downpour  

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/3/2012 6:19:00 PM

Very Beautiful image Sara, I so enjoy your Haiku's. I hope you try your hand at one of my Questionkus, with your creative ability I think you would be a natural. Have a nice evening.

Jack Horne

Date: 12/2/2012 10:35:00 AM

love this haiku, Sara

Toquyen Harrell

Date: 12/1/2012 9:34:00 AM

Oh, how cute. I can just see him shivering in the wind. Enjoyed, Sara.

Terry O'Leary

Date: 12/1/2012 7:39:00 AM

Beautiful image, Sara! Terry

Ajayi Angel-Simon

Date: 12/1/2012 7:27:00 AM

nice haiku... remembers Harper Lee's To Kill A Mockingbird... guess it's too cold to sing out its heart... Thanks for stopping by my poems.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/1/2012 6:04:00 AM

fantastic imagery Sara .. nicely penned luv .. thankxx for sm too ..cannot reply for some reason but tps has fixed most all problrms for me now .. I cannot find Blogs now as I have no heading for it .. was it removed during week I was off Soup?

Len Gasun

Date: 12/1/2012 2:44:00 AM

This is a very beautiful haiku my dear friend which I enjoy reading this evening! i love the warbling of a mockingbird. Thank you for sharing and have a blessed and grace-filled day/time! love and hugs, Leonora

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/30/2012 2:31:00 PM

poor bird! I bet you got his food fast. Light & Love

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 11/30/2012 12:54:00 PM

I like the metaphor in this Haiku Sara. Smiles, Connie

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/30/2012 12:27:00 PM

Sara, the mockingbird has the prettiest song of any bird.. Love this poem... Love, my state bird, sitting on the title of your haiku.... good imagery... always~pd

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/30/2012 11:18:00 AM

Very funny "About This Poem" comment my friend! This is a masterfully crafted write, I love it! I really enjoyed reading this wondrous and incredibly outstanding poem this afternoon! What a delightful and intriguing piece, Great Work!!