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Mlk At Birmingham

physically caged,
thinking thoughts of a true King -
in mind and soul - free

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Poet Destroyer A

January 5, 2013 at 12:12 AM

interesting senryu...pd

Kash Poet

February 3, 2011 at 11:44 AM

You have told so much with so little words here!!

Shirin Neshat

May 1, 2010 at 1:20 AM

Yes I can totally relate to what you wrote and I like how you word it. Its perfect!

Skat A

April 25, 2010 at 8:55 AM

I have not seen any entries in the contest, the best if luck, IRMA

Lynette Chachere

April 24, 2010 at 3:51 PM

i feel i am physically caged everyday,like i can't be all of me because people somehow get suspicious. i can't explain it, but i think it's my fault. i can only be fully me through my writings. one day that won't have to happen any longer. i love this poem, thanks for posting this Andrea. -Always&Forever Lynette

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

April 24, 2010 at 1:34 PM

Great write for the photo in Abe's contest.. good luck dear friend... as for your comment on "Anguish" .. I agree however now u see what I am referring to with my previous yahoo's to u regarding my thoughts about why not chosen in last four contests...luv.. Linda-Marie..

Daver Austin

April 24, 2010 at 10:33 AM

This sounds "New Age" to me. The prisoner is enlightened, eh? Love, Dave

Gert W. Knop

April 24, 2010 at 7:56 AM

Forgot to tell you where "El Tatio" is. It's a cluster of geysirs in the altiplano of the Atacama Desert...Gert

Doris Culverhouse

April 24, 2010 at 7:29 AM

good thoughts on the subject

Gert W. Knop

April 24, 2010 at 6:48 AM

Enjoyed reading this Senryu of yours, Andrea! Sorry, but I had no time yet to post my receips yet..Congrats to your big win! Today I posted a short story for a German competition. Thank you for your comments...Love, Gert

Amy Green

April 24, 2010 at 12:43 AM

Great write.

Margaret Foster

April 24, 2010 at 12:11 AM

Though the body be imprisoned the mind and soul fly free. what an inspiring verse. looks like this could be another feather in your cap..good one...luv Margaret