Mixed Up
Idea One:
I'd look into my future
to see the day on which I'll die,
to know just how I'll shuffle off:
the when, the how and why.
And looking at my future,
some changes I would bring about:
avoid the place, that time of day -
and live forever then, no doubt...
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