Misunderstood Re-Post

*This poem is re-posted because poet Richard Lamoureux was inspired by it and posted a nice poem on his page in return, titled:  Miss Understood. It is worth reading!  :)
  
 Do you ever feel misunderstood and lost?
Haunted by things like a cold returning frost?
The clock ticks loudly, as the days pass by.
But it feels like the clock stopped, why?
Those old thoughts return like a ghost.
Bringing, what no-one will understand the most.
Slowly your heart falls in an empty place.
People don’t see what’s inside, just your face.
Your soul feels like no-one can reach you.
All you hear is the clock tick, one and two.
What is this place you find yourself in?
Feeling like you’re losing, but want to win?
Longing for someone to just understand.
Someone trustworthy, to hold your hand.
But that person you trusted is no longer here.
The longing gets tougher, nothing is near.
The pain is like a burner too hot to touch.
You try to avoid it and it still hurts too much.
Then you shut down, the wall rises, doors close.
It’s easier than trying to explain to those
Who weren’t there, who cannot see.
It’s quite simple, you just want to be free.
So you ponder, you wish and you wait.
For the door to open again, it is late.
Like a miracle, somehow you know it will.
For time is a teacher, bringing warmth in the chill.

Heidi Sands

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Thomas Avatar
July 9, 2018 at 1:54 PM
Heidi I am very glad you reposted this. I'm very glad that Rick directed us to it, those of us who missed it initially. This is a very deep and touching write Heidi.
Sands Avatar
July 10, 2018 at 8:58 AM
Thank you very much FJ :)
Brereton Avatar
June 10, 2018 at 4:27 PM
Amazing Heidi, truly amazing. The emotion and flow is one of a kind. Your work is inspiring!!
Sands Avatar
June 10, 2018 at 4:36 PM
Thank you very much Kale. I am happy to hear that and appreciate your support :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 9, 2018 at 9:33 PM
This poem is so beautifully written Heidi! I love it! : )
Sands Avatar
June 10, 2018 at 6:31 AM
Thank you Connie. I appreciate your comment :)
Gupta Avatar
June 9, 2018 at 9:28 AM
Emotions and misunderstanding ... Wonderfully brought out ... A delightful read, Heidi ...
Sands Avatar
June 9, 2018 at 11:17 AM
Thank you Probir :)
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June 9, 2018 at 8:46 AM
Thanks for your visit this morning. It is good to see this piece receiving much deserved attention. Hugs Rick
Sands Avatar
June 9, 2018 at 11:17 AM
Thank you Richard :)
Riabi Dziri Avatar
June 9, 2018 at 6:23 AM
You have well portrayed the states of a human soul when misunderstood.. Amazingly thoughtful.. a pleasure to read! Thank you for sharing. Stay safe.
Sands Avatar
June 9, 2018 at 7:19 AM
Thank you Besma :)
Pett Avatar
June 9, 2018 at 6:19 AM
I thoroughly enjoyed reading your thought provoking poem Heidi, so many human emotions, so hard to understand, well written. :)
Sands Avatar
June 9, 2018 at 7:18 AM
Thank you Roy :) Poet Richard Lamoureux was inspired by this poem and wrote an excellent poem in return on his page :)
Goff Avatar
June 8, 2018 at 9:28 PM
the poet's life...with delightful relief ending! well done, Heidi!
Sands Avatar
June 9, 2018 at 7:18 AM
Thank you James :)
Pigeon Tart Avatar
June 8, 2018 at 8:49 PM
Wow. xomo <3
Sands Avatar
June 9, 2018 at 7:18 AM
Thank you Maureen :)
Lamoureux Avatar
June 8, 2018 at 5:43 PM
Lots to think about with this one. Thanks for inspiring me to write a response to it. Hugs Rick.
Sands Avatar
June 8, 2018 at 6:07 PM
Thank you Rick. It was great to hear you are inspired. You are welcome :)
Sergi Avatar
June 8, 2018 at 5:24 PM
Beautiful poetic wisdom, Heidi I love the last line!
Sands Avatar
June 8, 2018 at 5:31 PM
Thank you Ralph :)
Michael Avatar
June 8, 2018 at 3:18 PM
This is a wonderful write by all means...completely enjoyed it...All the best Heidi
Sands Avatar
June 8, 2018 at 4:25 PM
Thank you so much Arturo. :)
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